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What changed
The original H1 led with what the product does. The rewrite leads with who the buyer becomes. "Anyone can make a great video. That means you." The second sentence is a copywriting move called direct address, where the reader self-identifies with the outcome before deciding to scroll.
Why it works
Buyers convert on identity over features. The new H1 hands a visitor an identity in 9 words, which makes the decision to start a video editor feel less like buying software and more like becoming the person who makes videos.
What changed
The old H1 "ACHIEVE MORE" was vague enough to apply to a workout app, a coffee brand, or any productivity tool. The rewrite names a specific buyer pain ("doing it all is costing you") and turns it into a choice with a follow-up question. The subhead then anchors a hard price ($3,000/month) so visitors qualify themselves before the next click.
Why it works
Specific pain beats vague aspiration every time. By naming the cost the buyer is already paying, then offering a way out, the rewrite mirrors how a high-intent buyer's brain already runs through the problem. The price callout filters out anyone outside the customer profile, so every click below the fold is a high-intent click.
Your new H1
Founders, your funnel starts here.
I rewrite the part that matters most.
Written from scratch by Blake. Tested against three angles before landing on the strongest one. No templates, no AI-generated filler.
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I research, draft, edit, and mock up your new hero from scratch, by hand
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I'm obsessed with the first 5 seconds someone spends on your website.
That's what 10 years of writing 800+ landing pages will do to you. I've written heroes for Samsung, Betterment, Morning Brew, Athena, VEED, Riverside, Higgsfield, Ivanti, and dozens of startups you've never heard of. Former CMO at CopyAI. Marketing lead at multiple startups before that.
After all those pages, one truth keeps showing up. Your hero decides whether anyone reads the rest. So I built writemyhero.com to fix yours.
Agencies charge $2,000 to $5,000 for this same work. You pay $149.
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A new H1, subhead, and primary CTA written from scratch. Three alternate H1s for A/B testing. A visual wireframe of your new hero in a Google Doc table format. And a personalized walkthrough video explaining the thinking and recommended next steps.
One business day. Order Monday at 4pm, you get your hero by Tuesday at 4pm. Order Friday at 4pm, you get it by Monday at 4pm. Your exact delivery time shows on the order tracker the moment you pay.
Full money-back guarantee. If I miss your delivery time by even a minute, you get refunded. No questions, no negotiation.
No. Every order ships final. The research, the iterations, the alternates, all get baked into the deliverable. You get three H1 variants to test against, which solves the "did we pick the right angle" problem better than revisions ever could.
Yes, but it starts with a call. I offer a $499 full landing page audit with detailed insights and a 20-minute walkthrough video. For a full landing page rewrite, I'll scope it with you on a quick call. Both options unlock after your hero delivers.
Founders running SaaS, ecommerce, info products, agencies, or any business where a website hero is doing the heavy lifting on conversions. If you suspect your H1 could be sharper, this is for you.
Me, Blake. Former CMO at CopyAI. I've personally written or shaped 800+ landing pages across 10 years. Every order ships with my eyes on it.
Even if you skip the top recommendation, you walk away with three alternate H1s, a wireframe, and a strategy video. For $149, that's still a strong return on copywriting depth. Refunds only fire if I miss the deadline.